How to write a stunning press release
PressDoc is an easy-to-use tool when the basis of your press release is already there. However, when you are starting up a press release from scratch what should it look like? In this blogpost some insider tips for writing a press release.
The outline (based on the PressDoc format)
- Title
Describe the essence of the press release in one sentence – in such a way the reader’s attention will be grabbed immediately. - Subtitle
Describe the market and what the benefits may be for your customers. One sentence only. - Social media pitch
Explain in a maximum of 100 characters your most important or interesting message. A good pitch is the key to gain traffic to your press release! - Summary
Give a summary of your announcement and the benefits. Assume the reader will not read any further. Make this paragraph worthwhile.
7 tips for your social media pitch
This week’s blogpost is about the social media pitch. A pitch lays out why a story matters and a good pitch is the key to landing an assignment. In this case, a good pitch is the key to gain traffic to your press release.- Do some research. Create a list of blogs and journalists who could be interested in your press release. Find out if they’re writing about similar products, services, events or whatever your press release is about. Note that in order to do this you will have to invest time.
- Place yourself in your audience’s shoes. Stick with their mindset to find out what is interesting for them. Ask yourself: how would you like to be pitched to?
- What is necessary? It is best to leave the side issues out of your pitch. A good pitch tells briefly what the press release is about.
- Imagine your social media pitch as your first impression. Think again: you can only make your first impression once. Make sure that it’s a good impression.
- Writing a good social media pitch is as important as writing a winning title for your press release. Your headline should tell it all, so does your social media pitch.
- Meet expectations. Let your social media pitch be relevant to your press release.
- Be authentic. You are representing your press release but you are also representing yourself. Keep it personal, friendly and yet professional.
How do you write your social media pitch? Care to share your tips? Feel welcome to share them with us!
Introducing PressDoc for Events
Do you have an event coming up? Meet PressDoc’s extension named PressDoc for Events! It’s a PressRoom, created to gather all your press releases related to your event (think of exhibitors launching their new products and services).
Why PressDoc for Events?
- It’s very easy to set up. You’ll have your PressRoom ready in a couple of minutes.
- Make your sponsors and exhibitors happy. PressDoc for Events helps them spread their news to related press during your event.
- All your event news will be gathered in one place optimized for social media sharing.
- You’ll save time. Your exhibitors and event partners can manage their own press releases.
- One central place. You can link journalists and bloggers who visit your event to one place: your Pressroom.
2 PR insights from PressDoc users
In this blogpost we have a few more PressDocs for you that gained more traction than others. The people behind the press releases are going to share their tips and tricks with you on how to share your press release online.
Umbrellian Foundation
Marc Fleskens of Umbrellian Foundation:
My best advice to share an online press release is to search for people in your network who have a wide range of people in their own network (many followers / friends on Twitter and Facebook, many groups on LinkedIn, etc.). Then you approach that person directly with a request to help you spread the link to their own followers, preferably with a personal intro message. This way you make the best use of the people in your network and increase the involvement of the second and third line followers.
How to share your press release via Facebook
Last month we posted our blogpost ‘How to share your press release via Twitter’. This month it is Facebook’s turn. Facebook works a lot different than Twitter and it has a lot more options. A lot more options means a lot more ways to impress your audience with your press release.In order to send out your PressDoc…
There are a couple of things we all probably know by now. In order to send out a press release you need an audience to receive your message. Make sure you trigger your target group. Come up with a strong headline and write interesting news for your audience. In this case they are also active on Facebook, so you will need to use Facebook’s features to trigger them.
First of all, start using a fanpage
- It’s against Facebook’s rules to use your personal account for your company or brand. You don’t want to run the risk of losing your whole profile (including your content and fans!). You can find more about this in ‘How to build your audiences using Facebook’.
- I assume you want to be found on Google. Keep in mind: the content of your fanpage is indexed by Google unlike the content on your personal account.
- Fan pages allow you to keep an eye on the statistics and the increase of fans. You need overview so again: go fanpage!
3 PR insights from PressDoc costumers
Every month we’ll be picking a few PressDocs that gained more traction on social media than others. The people behind the press releases are going to share their tips and tricks with you on how to share a press release online.
Soocial
Stefan Fountain of Soocial:
First of all PressDoc’s standardized format really helped us in our publishing. In our most recent press release our content was the most important key to the traction we have gained. We had a big deal in our pockets, we were proud of this and people whom read about it told their friends.
There are some general rules we followed to spark the virality required:
In your content, don’t focus on yourself
Focus on the problem you are solving. People care about their problems getting solved, not your immense success and ‘awesome service’.If you have got good names to throw, do it
Our name is respected because we respect our users. Virgin Mobile, our partner’s name is also respected because, well, it’s Virgin! If you have names that bring positive associations out, throw them in the title. Ofcourse it needs to be real, related to your story and never just name drop. But if it is real and adds value then don’t be shy about it.Share on multiple platforms
We have directed media contacts, our communities on Twitter and Facebook, people on Reddit, Digg and Hacker News to read our publishing.Get those first initial tweets going yourself
You must have at least 5 people in your company on Twitter ect. Get them to retweet the news as it goes out and phone up a few friends in the industry to do the same. It provides the initial traction to your post and gets things going. It’s really key for things to pick up themselves after this.Optimize the timing for your publicity
The best time to go out and shout is either in the morning, or near the end of the day. Notice that if your news is relevant for people in different timezones, you can shout about it and give it an initial boost to cater for all of them (shout in the morning for Europe, then in the evening for America and Europe revisited).
How to share your press release via Twitter
You’ve just finished your PressDoc and now it is time to share it with the world. But how do you make your press release interesting for your Twitter followers? How can you make yourself noticeable? A lot of PressDoc users know that PressDoc automatically tweets your press release (at @PressDocfeed). But how can you do this effectively?
The POST model (Li and Bernoff, 2007) can be used to look at this. The POST model uses a four-step approach for social strategy.
- P stands for people. Before you send out a message you need to know who your target groups are, what their behavior is and what is relevant to them.
- O stands for Objective. You need to pick objectives that fit with the target groups.
- S stands for Strategy. Strategy here means figuring out the steps that you have to take to achieve the objectives.
- T stands for Technology. After deciding the right target groups, objectives and strategy you have to choose the right technology (for example social media).
For each public relations message a company has to decide for which target group it is relevant, what the objective is, how it will change the opinion of the target group and which technology has to be used to reach the target group.
The next part of this article describes how Twitter can be used effectively to send out press releases with PressDoc.
How to create a #WINNING title for your press release
Next to PR professionals, PressDoc customers are telling you that a winning title for your press release is essential to getting it out there. But how do you create a winning title? Based on the AIDA model (used a lot in marketing and PR), these are your guidelines:
Attention
- If there is anyone involved in the project, product or service you are writing about that is well known: mention them!
- Write down a few powerful adverbs that are relevant to the release, but also match with your style of communication and use on of them. Don’t overkill.
- Be creative, add humor for example.
- Create controversy.
Q&A: So I’ve published my PressDoc. Now what?
At support@pressdoc.com we’ve been receiving a few questions that get asked more than once. And to not only help those particular customers, we will be sharing one of these questions with you each month to help you as well.
@dannydewit asked us:
So I’ve published my PressDoc. Now what?
There are a few things PressDoc does for you, for which you don’t have to do anything:
- Your press release is shared with subscribers via PressDoc’s RSS feeds, email alerts (see http://pressdoc.com/category/all/all > top right) and through @PressDocFeed.
- Your press release is sent to Google News and every important search engine such as Google Search, Yahoo, Bing, Ask.com, etc. All press releases have been optimized for search engines and are indexed almost immediately.
After that PressDoc works a little different than the traditional wireservices that send your press release to an endless list of journalists. Relevance is more effective than pushing your press release through hundreds of channels, along with thousands of other press releases.
5 PR insights from PressDoc customers
Every month we’ll be picking a few PressDocs that gained more traction on social media than others. The people behind the press releases are going to share their tips and tricks with you on how to share a press release online.
Eneco
(Note: Eneco recently transfered to their own domain name which caused the loss of all previously registered retweets and likes. This is because Twitter and Facebook base those retweets and likes on URLs.)
Marcel van Dun of Eneco:
The most important part of a press release will – ofcourse – always be content. You have to have something to say. You can have a beautiful design with images and videos, but if your news isn’t relevant enough to share, there is no use.
Obviously we did have relevant news to share: consumers can get three solar panels on their rooftops for only 10 euros a month. Eneco takes care of all pre-investments. Solar panels are very popular and since the Dutch government put a stop to all grants, a lot of people are looking for different ways to purchase solar panels.



